Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
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good job Owen I like what you have done I think I'am going to put my Samoa slid on. I went to Samoa it was fun.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Owen
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing you slide show about Samoa. I loved the pictures you included. What side of your family does the samoan heritage come from? I haven't been to Samoa before but I'd love to. Have you?
Hello Owen.
ReplyDeleteYour slide is really cool, I have 3 things that I think you could work on...First of all It would be nice if you give your slide a cool title. The second thing you could do is... Describe your work so your reader knows about what you have been learning. The last thing is... You could make your title page more Colorful and make the slides with writing easier to read.
Bye for now..Shelby..